Chapter #3 the wood between the worlds

Digory was finally in the other world. It was really peaceful with a lot of tree's and there were pools every were. Digory got to the different world because he touched the golden ring. It was really strange how he traveled there. It was a pool that he climbed out of. When he got out of the pool he noticed a girl. It was Polly but it was so peaceful that he forgot about her. He walked over to her and stared at her and said nothing. She was laying there doing nothing. A few seconds later she sat up and stared at Digory and said nothing. They didn't notice each other at first but in a few minutes they remembered every thing. They wanted to go back to the other world so they put on the golden rings and jumped in the water but nothing happened. So they got out of the water and put on the green rings and they jumped. It worked this time and the saw Digory's uncle so the put on the gold rings really fast and went back to the different world. A few seconds later they went to a different pool and jumped in to it. I did not see any words I didn't know.